Friday, March 21, 2014

two hours in the making... | 21:30

sleep laps at the edges of my tired body
overtakes
and then lets go
refocus
overtakes
and then lets go
i wake up to remember it's spring break

Write on,
b

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  1. AnonymousMarch 21, 2014 at 11:22 PM

    I love the structure of your poem. "sleep laps at the edges of my tired body". That line sets the piece up with a symbiotic relationship with waves. Well done!

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