Tuesday, March 15, 2016

15: It's dark...

It's dark
my mind is
blank
tired
It's 11:11
that should be
auspicious
like winning the
prize in a
raffle drawing
or a
writing topic
at the laptop
in March
It's dark
upstairs
two boys
made it over the hill
I stand at the bottom
wishing
            dreaming
                          myself
                                    over
listening to their metronome breaths
It's dark

Write on,
b

4 comments:

  1. You grabbed a moment and wrote a great slice of life!

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  2. You grabbed a moment and wrote a great slice of life!

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  3. Sometimes our writing moments come at the very end of the day when the time belongs to us alone. Your writing moment was captured beautifully in your slice!

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  4. Nice piece. I enjoyed the format. It conveys such sweet, calm, brevity.

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