my mind is
tired
It's 11:11
that should be
auspicious
like winning the
prize in a
raffle drawing
or a
writing topic
at the laptop
in March
It's dark
upstairs
two boys
made it over the hill
I stand at the bottom
wishing
dreaming
myself
over
listening to their metronome breaths
It's dark
Write on,
b
You grabbed a moment and wrote a great slice of life!
ReplyDeleteYou grabbed a moment and wrote a great slice of life!
ReplyDeleteSometimes our writing moments come at the very end of the day when the time belongs to us alone. Your writing moment was captured beautifully in your slice!
ReplyDeleteNice piece. I enjoyed the format. It conveys such sweet, calm, brevity.
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