tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2941220820110399901.post7855415994301854251..comments2023-04-26T05:59:22.042-04:00Comments on Live... Write... Teach...: 2012 Slice-of-Life Story Challenge | 1bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05205255058860911148noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2941220820110399901.post-72584471090609821842012-03-02T00:19:29.629-05:002012-03-02T00:19:29.629-05:00Love the story, and the outcome, hated that awful ...Love the story, and the outcome, hated that awful splat. Thanks for another super story!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2941220820110399901.post-69651499934701430702012-03-01T23:39:36.602-05:002012-03-01T23:39:36.602-05:00Very cool shift in POV. I'm going to have to t...Very cool shift in POV. I'm going to have to try this before the month is out. <br /><br />BTW -- I think I owe you an email, but I'm a little overwhelmed right now with, well, life. The short message is -- NO PROBLEM! I UNDERSTAND. :)Ruth Ayreshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09691244229499772525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2941220820110399901.post-19920834322788997922012-03-01T22:59:09.236-05:002012-03-01T22:59:09.236-05:00I love your style and ruefully have various of my ...I love your style and ruefully have various of my own stories like these...Kathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15313656746369544232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2941220820110399901.post-56444563624127294842012-03-01T22:30:37.417-05:002012-03-01T22:30:37.417-05:00You do such a wonderful job of creating these scen...You do such a wonderful job of creating these scenes--I still remember your barista slice. You have such a wonderful way to play with the words. Thanks for sharing thisDeb Dayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861392500601183208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2941220820110399901.post-40886005030188576512012-03-01T21:41:08.975-05:002012-03-01T21:41:08.975-05:00Hello again - I love the third person reference yo...Hello again - I love the third person reference you used throughout the story. Creative. Glad you were able to enjoy your dinner. :)MaryHelenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2941220820110399901.post-18597807542919148612012-03-01T21:10:44.317-05:002012-03-01T21:10:44.317-05:00Love your story...I have a similar one...it involv...Love your story...I have a similar one...it involves a trash can...maybe I write it for tomorrow's slice...<br />Thanks for sharing your story and advice-you are truly right-slow and steady wins the race!Amy Ruddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18177520075043676835noreply@blogger.com