tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2941220820110399901.post4594068334410760645..comments2023-04-26T05:59:22.042-04:00Comments on Live... Write... Teach...: 2012 Slice-of-Life Story Challenge | 5 of 31bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05205255058860911148noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2941220820110399901.post-62265350898433977752012-03-06T12:39:36.751-05:002012-03-06T12:39:36.751-05:00I love your slices...mostly because of the way you...I love your slices...mostly because of the way you work the words and manipulate the text. And also, because I think you're just awesome. Glad you found your key,<br />RuthRuth Ayreshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09691244229499772525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2941220820110399901.post-32953155655556949682012-03-05T22:53:18.700-05:002012-03-05T22:53:18.700-05:00First let me say, Yeah, you found it! I know the f...First let me say, Yeah, you found it! I know the feeling of panic (thought I'd lost my cell phone) and the futility of the search in a panic. I loved all the text manipulation to develop your story. Hope you don't mind, but I'm pinning this to my mentor text board.elsiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01348895330633879894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2941220820110399901.post-7549025712680682842012-03-05T21:17:23.633-05:002012-03-05T21:17:23.633-05:00LOVED this slice! I felt the panic and knew the f...LOVED this slice! I felt the panic and knew the feeling and the frustration of finding it when you least expect. Loved the repeating line and the words parking lot stalk. How I've done that a few times. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2941220820110399901.post-37839927014117710542012-03-05T19:30:27.995-05:002012-03-05T19:30:27.995-05:00I feel your pain! I once lost a pair of car keys....I feel your pain! I once lost a pair of car keys...at home! I knew I had to have used them to get home. <br /><br />I love your description- they were politely waiting for you!Christy Rush-Levinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15581876400990779210noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2941220820110399901.post-85986876178030394372012-03-05T19:14:50.438-05:002012-03-05T19:14:50.438-05:00Ah-h-h-h! That's a yell for you! So frustrat...Ah-h-h-h! That's a yell for you! So frustrating to do that. Recently my husband misplaced his billfold. All I could think was all the cards we would have to call about & replace. We looked for hours, & it was in the bottom of the laundry pile, had fallen out of his pants when he put them in the basket. Next time, think of that! I'm so glad you found your key & id. It is awful stalking outside the school, tapping on the windows, hoping someone will let you in. Great slice, shouts & all!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.com